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Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given layouts illustrate how the public
park
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 called Grange
park
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 looked when it
first
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 opened in 1920 and how it looks in the present. Overall, the Grange
park
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 has been modernized with some natural features replaced by up-to-date facilities. The two entrances on Arnold avenu and
Eldon
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street
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 have remained unchanged.
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, the
park
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 now has an underground car
park
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 so a side entrance has been added from
Eldon
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street
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 immediately to the right of the
park
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 to provide access for car
park
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 users. Entering the
park
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 from
Eldon
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street
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, you will see the rose garden surrounded by seats, at the centre of the
park
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, the
centre
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feature
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 of which used to be a fountain. To your right, there were once a glasshouse and some seats, which have now been replaced by the water
feature
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. Opposite the water
feature
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 is the cafe and the children's play area which used to be a rose garden and pond for water plants. A stage of musicians previously stood on the left side of the
park
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 from
Eldon
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street
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. It has been replaced by the amphitheatre for concerts. The only
feature
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 that has remained unchanged in
this
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 area is the rose garden on the Arnold avenue side.
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