the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. why do many working people ant get enough exercise? what can be done about this problem?

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. There are several items of

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. If I had to pick the most prominent of which. I would probably go for the policies of

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managers. In fact , increasing the incoming their business is foremost of workers

health

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time , the employees satisfying is decreasing in

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their personnel efficiency by wrong

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human

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race was growing.

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appropriate gyms

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building a gym needs to spend so much money .

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place, the heads have to take into account their personnel . one of the most important

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to encourage to exercise is allocate the

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of extra work hours for a person who

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sport. Another way forward could be

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for refreshing and fitness . namely, pool, stadium to play football, and so on. I would like to close my argument

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while considering the

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, managers are able

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their people who work to do exercise

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their attitudes. I recommended the companies build a place to do exercise.