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The charts below show the favorite takeaways of people in Canada and the number of Indian restaurants in Canada between 1960 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the favorite takeaways of people in Canada and the number of Indian restaurants in Canada between 1960 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given pie
chart
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 illustrates the most famous fast
food
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 taken away by citizens of Canada, and the bar
chart
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 shows how many
Indian
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 restaurants existed in
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 country.
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, it can be seen that the inhabitants spend most of their money buying Thai fast
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while
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 Mexican, Japanese and Greek
food
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 are the least favourite in Canada.
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, there was a sprout of
Indian
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 restaurants
from1960
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from 1960
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 2015.
According to
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 the pie
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, the Chinese takeaways are the most prominent group standing at 34%, followed by the
Indian
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 which was recorded at 26%. Meanwhile, the number of Mexican, Japanese,
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 Greek fast
food
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 brought back home is the least favourable and witnessed at 1% only. Turning to the bar
chart
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, it can be seen that an upward trend has been experienced during a period of 55 years. Starting from 1960, the number of
Indian
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 restaurants saw a steady increase from approximately 500 diners to 8000 in 2000.
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, since 2007, the number has remained
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 than 8000 and the highest as shown in 2009.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words chart, food, indian with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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