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Health experts claim that walking is the best exercise. However, people are walking less on a daily basis. What has made it happen and how to deal with this?

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It is widely known that walking is healthy and
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 the best and simplest exercise. But why do
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 prefer not to walk on a daily routine? There are a lot of reasons for that.
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 tend to go with the vehicle because it is faster and safe from unpredictable weather.
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, there is no
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 on the road. Many
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 believe that walking gives a lot of benefits
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 as being healthier and environmentally friendly. But
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 nowadays like to use vehicles for their daily routine because it is more practical and does not take much time on the way. Many
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 have their houses far from their office or maybe school because of population density, so they prefer to go by bike, car, or public transportation to get there. It
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 avoids them from unpredictable weather,
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, they walk to their destination by walk but when they come home, the rain is falling and can prevent them to go home. Another reason is the inadequate
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. A
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 is a main factor for the walker's safety. To illustrate that from my experience, in my country, there is no precise
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. The
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 is just for the main road but on the lane, there is no adequate
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 so
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 usually use the vehicle road for walks and it is dangerous for walkers. In conclusion, I think the government must give facilities for walkers to be more comfortable and safe. They can
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 put some chairs on the sidewalk and if it is implemented I do believe
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 tend to walk rather than use vehicles.
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