Health experts claim that walking is the best exercise. However, people are walking less on a daily basis.

Health professionals declared that routinely walking is considerably the best way to exercise. Unfortunately,

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majority of individuals tend to walk less

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. In

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essay, I would like to elaborate on

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versality

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versatility

of lifestyle and give the solutions to

this

.

To begin

with, one of the many reasons that make people have

this

bad habit is the improvement of transportation technology. Due to the influence of vehicles

such

as cars, bicycles and others,

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easily creates a huge amount of public mobility.

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, in the

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our ancestors had to walk hundreds to thousands of

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to get from one destination to another, but today's society

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it easy to reach

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a place without walking at all. Another possible reason for

this

problem is that many people today prefer to choose a job that requires less physical activity.

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, in the past, the actual work that required powerful physics , the job that requires people to do manual

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now is considered to be less

favored

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today's

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society.

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transportation technology and work preferences can indirectly affect the reduced mobility of the population to use their feet. The solution I suggest to overcome that lazy lifestyle is that the government needs to take some steps to advise the public to raise public awareness in order to awaken them.

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, the management could run monthly or yearly campaigns to spread the important message of

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healthy life to

societies

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.

In addition

, one needs to change their

attitudes

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. To sum up, walking is a good free exercise for humans, and simple actions can change our

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. We need to reduce our reliance on

transportations

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and start to adopt a healthy lifestyle.