Some people say that TV advertisements are helpful for viewers, while others disagree. What is your opinion?

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Some

people

say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need.

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say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Today, the commercial industry is booming and advertisements are flooding

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tv and the internet. Many

people

feel annoyed with

this

and some

people

are finding it interesting to explore the new

product

. In my

opinion

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are mostly

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a hoax

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hoax

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. In

this

essay

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we will see why

this

is the case.

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of all,

companies are making

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
3Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
43Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

322 words

4.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

6.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Some people say that TV advertisements are helpful for viewers, while others disagree. What is your opinion?

Fully explain your ideas

Gender equality has not been achieved in our society. Women still do not have the same rights and opportunities as men. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

The education of young people is highly prioritised in many countries. However, educating adults who cannot write or read is even more important and governments should spend more money on this. To what extent do you agree and or disagree?

Each year, the crime rate increase. What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity.

Some people think the government funding should not be used for supporting art and culture, others think supporting cultural activities may be beneficial for the population and the culture. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Task 1 (150-200 words): You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the council. In your letter say how you heard about the plan explain how you feel about it ask for more information about it