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Behaviour in schools is getting worse Explain the causes and effects of this problem and suggest some possible solutions

#behaviour #schools #effects
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Schools play an important role in
children
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's education.
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, it is becoming clear that there is a growing number of wrongdoings by
students
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 because of low-quality institution policies and a connection between
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 and
parents
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. The solutions
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 need to be considered.
First
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 of all,
school
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 rules are not fully followed by their
students
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. Because of
this
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,
children
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 do not pay attention to their friends and
teachers
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 and behave as they want to do.
This
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 situation may deprive kids of their opportunities for learning.
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, if some
students
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 are chatting during classes, which need to be restricted, of course, other learners cannot focus on their studies.
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,
parents
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 are more likely to complain about
teachers
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' teaching compared to the past. Criticism from
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 threatens tutors and
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, they cannot scold
children
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 enough when kids do something wrong. As a matter of fact,
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parents
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 are becoming a big problem and are called "monster
parents
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".
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, solutions to these issues need to be implemented. One of the solutions will create more strict
school
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 rules and make
students
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 abide by them.
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 will discourage
students
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 to talk with friends while
teachers
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 are explaining maths problems,
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. And
consequently
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,
students
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 can pay their full attention to classes.
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, another possible way to deal with
parents
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-related problems is to try to keep in touch with
parents
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 and inform them enough information
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 as how their kids are spending a
school
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 life.
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 an effort will let
parents
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 understand
school
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 policies easily.
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, it is become easier to get support from them. To conclude, there are some reasons why
students
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 behave badly in schools, which bring about serious effects on both
children
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 and
teachers
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.
Therefore
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, considering ways to combat these issues is important.
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