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Behaviour in schools is getting worse Explain the causes and effects of this problem and suggest some possible solutions

#behaviour #schools #effects
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At present,
conduct
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 of
students
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schools
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,
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 gradually poses negative consequences to school and peer groups.
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 essay will elaborate on the reasons, effects and possible solutions to the problem. To start with, the unruly
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behavior
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behaviour
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 of
students
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increase
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increases
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 due to
non imposition
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 of severe
punishment
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 for
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wrongdoers
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wrong doers
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. I have heard of instances
which
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 teachers punished
students
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 for bad
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behavior
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, in the past.
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,
punishment
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 for school
children
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 seems to diminish with time, and rarely
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 hear of punishing
children
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 for negative conduct. Another reason that may count for the wrong
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behavior
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behaviour
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 of
students
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 is the company of uneducated
students
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. Receiving no education never builds up a positive character.
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such
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children
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 may resort to violence or bullying of peers.
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Consequently
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such
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behavior
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behaviour
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 might influence excellent
students
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 to engage in illegal activities
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 as smoking and drinking alcohol.
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, a recent newspaper in my country has reported
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% of college
students
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 have misbehaved due to addiction
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 drugs and cigars during the school period.
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, Indifferent attitudes towards student offences will ultimately produce a less disciplined generation. As
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 issue has spread far and wide in many
schools
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 it is impossible to find a feasible solution.
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, I would say apart from teaching , the
schools
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 have an obligation to mould the character of
students
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.
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 ,
punishment
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 has to be implemented for
misbehavior
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misbehaviour
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 at any cost.
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, parents and teachers
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 to be role models for
students
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, demonstrating excellent human qualities
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 as
honor
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 and kindness.
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, mutual understanding between
children
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 and parents is crucial in inculcating positive behaviour within offspring. In conclusion,
schools
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 should support
children
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 to build up the best characters
out of
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them while granting education.
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punishment
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 should be imposed as a method to control
misbehavior
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misbehaviour
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.
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