You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer Write at least 150 words.

Dear John, I'm glad to hear that you are going on a camping holiday for the
first
time
this
summer. Before you go there, I would like to give some
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advice
advices
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advice
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for you. I know that
this
camping is your
first
experience and you will love the nature of
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Forrest
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forrest
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the forrest
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. When you are going to
forrest
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, you will hear the sounds of singing birds and the flow of the stream all the
ways
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. But please take your own bottle because there is no place to get fresh water in the
forrest
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forest
Forrest
.
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, you should bring mosquito repellent spray which can be protected
from
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biting an insect or mosquito. When we went camping
last
month, we didn't bring these
spray
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sprays
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so we face a difficult situation but fortunately one of my friends brought one for herself and she shared some
of
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us. I think I will not be able to go with you
this
summer because I will go back to my hometown and spend with my family. I hope that you will enjoy your camping trip and don't forget to share your experiences
also
. Best Wishes, Ivy
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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