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Some people think that the best way to run a business is within the family. What are the advantages and disadvantages of a family run business?

#people #business
Starting
a
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 own
business
 is a good way for long-term purposes. Some
people
 think that running a
business
 with
the
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family members
are
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 the best
options
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.
However
, I believe that these options will give the disadvantages outweigh the advantages. There are
some
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myriad reasons behind
such
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the
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family member, we encounter social problems. There will be different
perspective
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perspectives
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 among family members and will have a
confilct
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conflict
 with each other
as a result
 it takes to solve a problem. The family member who
want
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 to involve in
business
 if
they
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don't understand the situation of
job
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the job
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 while a bond will lose with each
members
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.
Besides
, there will have
an
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inequality and
then
 how to divide each of the shares. On contrary, recruiting
a
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staff is the advantage of working with the family. To elaborate
further
, nowadays, most
of
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people
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 are starting individually
instead
 of working for an organization.
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In deed
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Indeed
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, they are fed up
of
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with
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 working for other
people
 in that case family
business
 is the great
benefits
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benefit
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 and
interview
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interviews
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 a lot of
people
 for meeting their requirements. In conclusion,
this
 critique elucidated the virtues and hiccups of running a
business
 within
family
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a family
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. Despite the fact that I am profoundly convinced that the cons of
this
 phenomenon overshadow the cons.
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