In some areas of the US, a 'curfew' is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

There is no denying that

curfew

is the best decision made by the authorities of

the

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particular state at any crucial or

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pandemic period. It aids in working on the obstacles going around the world we live

.

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Looking forward

for

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the safety of

people

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curfew

is the only way to cease it.

Curfew

means staying home for our safety should be acceptable. In my

opinion

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allowing teenagers to go

out

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outdoor

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door

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the door

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without

accompany

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adults during

curfew

is not advisable as some area of

US

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the US

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where

curfew

is imposed due to

illegal

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the illegal

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activity going around and have disturbed the lives of citizens dwelling there,

so

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it was necessary to take

this

step to control the current situation. So as a citizen we ought to follow the rules and stay at home.

Younger

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generation

are

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deprived of the rules and restriction and may trap in

evil

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the evil

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action. As they can’t justify what is wrong and right or may practice any

misbehavior

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. They should not move outside alone especially at night because it might be troublesome for them to cope

up

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with

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any critical situation. Taking advantage of

current

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era drugs mafia may attract them.

This

influence

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them to involve in it and

as a result

drugs

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business and addiction

increases

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. Apart from

this

, rioters are not used to

stay

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at home, they

wander

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in the town can harm them.

On the other hand

, to make them mature and responsible, parents should allow them

go

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out alone

with

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providing relevant information about

curfew’s

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rules and

regulation

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.

This

will help them to predict the problem

if

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they may have to face.

Sometime

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as a parent we are insecure and

concern

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about our

child

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children

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and won’t keep them lonely,

as a

result

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they wouldn’t be active enough to communicate in

such

circumstances

arise

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suddenly and fully

depended

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on us. So, some liberty should be allotted to them.

Initially

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they can’t distinguish between real and unreal, but gradually it may be easy for them. To conclude, I would like to agree with teenagers should be permitted to go out alone during

curfew

. As a

parent

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it’s our duty to make them aware of the world around

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as

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they can handle and cope

up

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apply

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with problems

if

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arise

in

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at

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the

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particular time in future. And

least

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point is to ensure them that your support will be always there whenever they need it.