Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industry to move to regional areas outside large urban centers. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Huge institutions and mills should be transferred from the city to the outside of the town where it contains a
lot
of space. There are both merits and demerits of
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Despite the positive sides, it creates a lot
of cost
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Firstly
, there is a huge expenditure use while there will be a chance of moving. Secondly
, budget quality should be enriched. Thirdly
, systems must be moderate so that it
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However
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of money.
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