Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industry to move to regional areas outside large urban centers. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Huge institutions and mills should be transferred from the city to the outside of the town where it contains a
lot
of space. There are both merits and demerits
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. From my perspective, there are a
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to the negative phenomenon. One of the
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of transferring companies and industries is to save
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nature. Urban
area
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are now fully grabbed by fashioning a
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of
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.
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there creates
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boulevard and
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is cutting down trees at the same time. Not only that it fills up with a
lot
of paths but
also
it expands
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. Moving vast
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of company and industry can create descent blank spaces. Another advantage is that transferring industry and offices can form a good level of cleanliness in the urban
area
.
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, air quality becomes good if materials of
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would be thrown out
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from the town
area
. Despite the positive sides, it creates a
lot
of
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.
Firstly
, there is a huge expenditure use while there will be a chance of moving.
Secondly
, budget quality should be enriched.
Thirdly
, systems must be moderate so that
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could be easily traceable.
However
, it is not an easy task to create a rapid
moving
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.
As a result
, there needs a huge amount of money.
Thus
, an effective idea should be implemented.
For instance
, creating a transfer on
factory
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or large company
it
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needs a huge
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amount
of money. In conclusion, it is the best way to shift
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and factories.
However
,
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system should be considered. I am in my opinion moving
factory
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from urban to outside creates a
lot
of useful things compare to the drawback.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Economic Development
  • Job Opportunities
  • Local Spending
  • Infrastructure Development
  • Urban Congestion
  • Traffic Congestion
  • Pollution Levels
  • Overpopulation
  • Operational Costs
  • Quality of Life
  • Living Conditions
  • Commuting
  • Community Development
  • Healthcare
  • Education
  • Social Services
  • Environmental Impact
  • Innovation Hubs
  • Collaborations
  • Profitability
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