All children should learn to speak a foreign language as soon as they start school. How far do you agree with this proposal? How important is it for a child to learn a foreign language?

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modern communities, having the knowledge of at least a foreign

language

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their vernacular seems a necessity for children who start

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. Almost all parents insist on

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ability for their kids. But really the importance would be discussed here. Proponents of learning a

further

language

believe that increasing trend in nations communications

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makes people

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the youngers to know another popular

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to keep their relationship.

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have been published by academic talents from developed countries so having the ability of reading or

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languages like English, French or Mandarin would be a demand.

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should learn these languages as soon as they start

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school to understand everything well and go far. The ideal age for learning a foreign

language

is concurrent with

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of school age. Finding an appropriate job may need going to a foreign country. Some others choose

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different schools or universities in foreign countries

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, they will need to know how to speak or write and

also

find what they say.

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access to social media makes people

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be familiar with different languages as

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. There are opponents

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the policy of learning extra

speech

in schools. They assume that making

students

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learn another

language

is a type of

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and it should be abstained by the Governments.

Students

have

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right to learn another

speech

or not so, they should not be obliged. A student should have the potential of getting success without having the knowledge of an extra

language

. Briefly, it could be seen that most children now have

tendency

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to learn another

language

apart from their

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language

then

this

capability should be arranged for them appropriately. Learning different kinds of

speech

and slang is an art and

also

could expand the learning potential of

students

.