many people are doing their shopping on the internet nowadays. discuss the advantages and disadvantages of and give your opinion?

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so important for
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it makes stuff easier to
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. Another
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think
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makes
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shopping on the
internet
easy could bring any
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at home. The
quesion
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is many
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are prefer
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their shopping on the
internet
nowadays? in
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,
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I am going to discuss my opinion. In terms of advantages, there are many things to
purchase
on
internet
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such
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as Laptop
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Laptop
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,
furniture
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and furniture
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,
besides
video games. many individuals prefer to
purchase
online rather than to
purchase
on
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store
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. The main reason given to support
this
claim is that two
weaks
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weeks
ago I bought from
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watch, I bought from online because the watch has
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50
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precent
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per cent
present
that
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made me
shopping
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on the
internet
. To illustrate
that is
make
community
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go to
purchase
online rather than going to
purchase
on
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the
store
. ,
However
disadvantages, several
of
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time shopping online made a person upset
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what he got
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sometimes
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people buy clothes
from
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online
in
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then
after 4 days the person receive the package, the T-shirt did not the same size on
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website
wepsite
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they got different size. To sum up,
although
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purchase
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on the
internet
because from home or
any where
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they just click the
putton
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button
on screen and waiting for three days until received the
packge
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package
page
. In my opinion, I would like to choose shopping
on
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online
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as cheaper as
store
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they got
huge
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a huge
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discount on online rather than
store
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I got
same
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price.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • E-commerce
  • Consumer behavior
  • Virtual marketplace
  • Cybersecurity
  • Digital footprint
  • Return policy
  • Comparison shopping
  • Customer reviews
  • Retail therapy
  • Logistics
  • User interface
  • Payment gateway
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