many manufactured food and drink product contain high level of sugar, which causes many health problem. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. do you agree or disagree ?

Many health issues that

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worldwide suffer from are linked to the abusive consumption of

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particularly found in manufactured food and drinks.

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, it is suggested that raising those goods' prices would affect the behaviour of consumers in a way that limits their purchase of

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. In my view, I disagree with

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belief and hold that there are more adequate ways to tackle

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problem.

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's tendency to consume canned food or soft drinks is constantly increasing resulting in multiple and sometimes serious health problems,

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could mainly be attributed to the lack of awareness and individuals' ignorance of those goods' components.

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is always found in high quantities in manufactured foods and drinks explaining the sweet and addictive taste that most

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can't resist.

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, obesity has become a challenging dilemma even among children because school most school cafeterias' menu provides prepackaged food and snacks.

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, many diseases could be prevented if our consumption of those

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is reduced. It is deemed that increasing the prices of sugary

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would encourage

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to limit their purchase of sweet aliments because not all

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can afford them,

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, it would indirectly modify their habits.

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could not solve

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problem since most aliments contain

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, let alone the damage that factories and companies would face.

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, an expensive market would only widen the social gap in a way that sugary

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would be restricted to the bourgeoisie class.

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, I believe that sensitising customers about the health hazards and threats resulting from adopting an imbalanced diet and raising awareness as well as encouraging them to read the ingredients on the goods labelling are efficient solutions. In conclusion, while it is deemed that sugary

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should be made more expensive to encourage

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to consume less

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in order to decrease related numerous diseases, I,

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, disagree and challenge that

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would create more problems than it solves.