In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

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that
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higher individuals are becoming interested in finding out about the
history
of , the
house
they are living in for there are several reasons for
this
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these questions I discussed
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. Discussing the first question, there are many reasons for
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finding out the
history
of the
house
they
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in
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Firstly
, the oldest
house
is very much given value as a classical
house
because
there
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the old
house
was made by using old raw materials and
some time
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in auction their value in money
also
rises.
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In Vadodara
city
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some oldest houses will be like
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Maharaja Sayaji
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Rao's
house
;
However
, In some old ,
house
there
were
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some archaeological things
for example
old coin or old currency and using their oldest currency give the highest value. Referring, to the second question people
also
can carry out research on
this
subject because its subject gives classical
knowledge
about
the
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house
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houses
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and other buildings.
Such
as in the oldest year how Individuals use raw materials for making
bracks
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bricks
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. and bracks are very strong compared to the new one.
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human beings
also
know about the oldest things and give their specific
knowledge
to their child for increased interest in knowing
history
subjects. For ,example children
also
know about
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history
of India because
of
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their
knowledge
become made u pride person of India. All in all, the interest in finding out the
history
of their
house
is
also
useful and
also
continue
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with research into a historical subject;
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, some people are
also
interested
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in finding
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out about
history
and knowing the
history
of different subjects. It gives extra
knowledge
about some things, that you want to know. I agree with the second question
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Include an introduction and conclusion

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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

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  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Historical research
  • Genealogy
  • Architectural styles
  • Heritage
  • Relics
  • Oral history
  • Archival records
  • Museum exhibits
  • Historical societies
  • House tours
  • Renovation projects
  • Original blueprints
  • Careful documentation
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