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It is often said that we live today in a “throwaway society” in which people buy things and soon after throw them away. What are the causes of the “throwaway society”? What problems could the “throwaway society” create?

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in recent
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 our society became very fast in respect to
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 with the others,doing which even they don't know that they are introducing
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 to our community.Nowadays the use and throw concept is so popular among people.
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 the development of these
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 of behaviour in the whole world is easy resource availability of those types of
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 in the level of income of the family. ,
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 social media plays a vital role in the increase of these habits.
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 are using social apps to post their pictures in which they show their lifestyle,so to maintain that they tend
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not to repeat the clothes or places or interiors. In recent times showing off to others somehow create its own place which is
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 a big concern to be taken care
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 us. Let's discuss the major problem done to throwaway
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 should be global warming.
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 in explanation of my view all the fabric,poly items or plastic items has been thrown in open which is not biodegradable and taking us to a very serious issue.
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 when we use anything made by paper,fabric or other raw material items used to produce the end product,for those we are cutting down trees or killing animals or utilising some of
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 limited resources
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 lately will create a bigger challenge of scarcity of these. To conclude
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 would say that in
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 fast-growing universe people forget that by the following use and trends we are leading to a future where our generation will bear for
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 mistakes done by us. it is going to increase if the individual does not break the taboo of being superior
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 the other one by not reusing the articles.

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Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic

Problem-and-solution essays fall naturally into two parts, the first describing and exploring the problem, the second setting out the solution or solutions.

You essay structure should look something like this:

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – Problems
  • Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • One of the first problems of the...
  • Another problem that needs to be considered...
  • A possible solution to this problem would be...
  • One immediate practical solution is to...

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • 1. Consumer culture
  • 2. Planned obsolescence
  • 3. Technological advancements
  • 4. Low-cost products
  • 5. Disposable mentality
  • 6. Environmental impact
  • 7. Sustainability
  • 8. Recycling
  • 9. Impulsive purchases
  • 10. Upgraded features
  • 11. Marketing strategies
  • 12. Advertising campaigns
  • 13. Outdated products
  • 14. Limited lifespan
  • 15. Frequent replacements
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