You eat at your college cafeteria at lunch time every day. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter: explain what you like about the cafeteria say what is wrong with it suggest how it could be improved

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Dear Sir, I am writing to you to express problems faced by me as well as other students during lunchtime in the cafeteria.

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, It has all the basic necessities

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as a water cooler yet I am facing various discomforts. The food served by them is very delicious.

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to it, the people serving the meals are very polite and humble. I love the lunch they fed me.

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, they prepared the item which is in special demand by faculty or students. Despite these likings, I am too much disappointed with the seating arrangement in the canteen. All the chairs are not properly managed which causes a messy environment in the hall.

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, there are fewer tables due to which many people have to wait for their turn. I would like to suggest that please arrange more tables so that no one has to wait for their turn to eat meals.

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, ask the staff to place all the chairs in proper arrangement.

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change will be beneficial to serve us in a good way. I hope you will look into the matter. Yours Sincerely, Kuljeet Kaur.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

189 words

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