Some people believe that childhood is the best stage of happiness. While others believe that a person can enjoy more happiness in other stages of life . Discuss both views and given your opinion?

People

have different opinions about happiness and the happiest moment in their lives. While many

people

find that they were very happy as teenagers, others find that adulthood was more enjoyable than their teenage years.

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the happiest periods of

life

can vary from person to person, I totally agree with

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thought. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall discuss both views and share my opinion.

To begin

with, every stage of

life

has its joy and sorrows. Many

people

remember their childhood years with

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pleasure. There are several reasons for

this

. Most

people

would enjoy a greater sense of freedom during their college or high school days.

In addition

, since in those years friendship and brotherhood were in the prime of

Life

, many experienced joyful moments.

Also

, they could play more sports during that time. Not just

this

,

for example

, college parties were great ways to get together and have fun.

Furthermore

, teenagers have far fewer responsibilities than adults.

On the other hand

, adult

life

offers several positive and happy moments. Most adults fondly remember their cherished moments,

such

as their

first

home or job, the celebration of their wedding day, the birth of a child, and so on. To add , with age,

people

also

develop and evolve qualities

such

as maturity and understanding. These factors can bring a sense of satisfaction and stability, which in turn contributes to long term happiness in many

people

's lives. In conclusion, after examining both sides, the debate indicates that both views have their own vindication. But in my opinion, the sense of self satiation comes with achieving certain milestones and

this

is achieved during the latter phase of

life

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can say that a person can enjoy more happiness in other stages of

life

.