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Many people feel that media coverage has becoming increasingly biased today. Why is this? What can be done to fix this problem?

#people #media #coverage
Over the past few decades,
News
 has become the 4th pillar of democracy.
Media
 supports freedom of speech
hence
 there is a group of people that thinks
media
 these days doesn't focus on the truth rather it supports favouritism. In the forthcoming, paragraphs one is going to discuss causes and evolve solutions from them.
Media
 plays a vital role in day-to-day life. It keeps us connected with the outer world with a single click. In earlier time only government-regulated
news
 channel was in existence and their only motto was to deliver the
news
.
However
, today journalism has become a business too; Each
media
 houses want to be the
first
 in the race for TRP.
Moreover
, The channels which are getting immense views
also
 get a significant amount to showcase brand advertisements and in the ,end it all leads to biased
news
.
On the other hand
, favouritism can be controlled.
To begin
 with, a government body should actively participate to eliminate
such
 biased views.
Furthermore
, the
media
 consumers can play an important role. People should have the courage to raise their voice against
such
media
 houses or shows and with the help of technology it is certainly possible.
For instance
, A famous celebrity gave a statement that has hurt the sentimental values of a specific religion. People have started a trend on Twitter to boycott the actor’s upcoming movie and they succeeded too. To conclude, Every business owner will think of a way to increase the reach and profit of the business so does the
media
 houses too.
However
, Who can stop or control them? The answer is simple, the consumer and government. The government should have rules and regulations which stop them and consumers can
also
 take charge by boycotting
such
 shows.
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