An ageing population is affecting parts of the world

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avoid death and ageing.According to

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we could know about human

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life must

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experience ageing progress and pass away.

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,the world population have been increasing too faster,

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about

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society

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medical resource and economically

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. “The major cause of medical resource was serious insufficient to support elder.The

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continuous given to elder people or

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be hospitalized patients not good in enough medical system,because of population grow fast have been

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struction variety of age group in the country.

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affect financial must to high expenses and medical resource lacking. “The

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market shortage didn'

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have enough young people participate.The

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of economy developed or lead to corporation management difficulty couldn'

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found

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employee.The

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market need

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plenty of

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who

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each

countries

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participation career market,due to an ageing population affect many

countries

want to figure out a solution,

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government used appropriate policy like immigration to

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foreigner

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make

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normally developed and advanced. “The

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reason is retirement elder take

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of

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worker requirement problem it's not just only financial expenses

also

need

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to support older.

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other

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developed retirement communities to take

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,which could make a convenient

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and offer comfort

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and 24-hour-a-day,bathing,feeding, laundry etc. The communities have paid a high expense it,but a part of people

could'

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enough money burden it,I think it will big problem with

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society

them

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must found

solution

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