“People a lifetime couldn'
avoid death and ageing.According to
aboveCorrect article usage
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we could know about human
beingsChange noun form
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life must
to Fix the infinitive
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experience ageing progress and pass away.
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NowadayCorrect your spelling
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,the world population have been increasing too faster,
the experts
worriedAdd a missing verb
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about
effectsCorrect article usage
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societyChange noun form
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medical resource and economically
developedReplace the word
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.
we will discuss
and
causesCorrect pronoun usage
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“The major cause of medical resource was serious insufficient to support elder.The
of hospitals and human resources burden couldn'
continuous given to elder people or
livedAdd the particle
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be hospitalized patients not good in enough medical system,because of population grow fast have been
bringChange the verb form
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struction variety of age group in the country.
affect financial must to high expenses and medical resource lacking.
“The
reason is
laborChange the spelling
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market shortage didn'
have enough young people participate.The
of economy developed or lead to corporation management difficulty couldn'
found
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employee.The
laborChange the spelling
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market need
to Change preposition
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plenty of
workerChange to a plural noun
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who
formChange the verb form
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each
countriesChange noun form
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participation career market,due to an ageing population affect many
want to figure out a solution,
developed
countriesChange noun form
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government used appropriate policy like immigration to
attractiveReplace the word
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foreigner
participateFix the infinitive
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make
normally developed and advanced.
“The
reason is retirement elder take
issue.
I Correct pronoun usage
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The
of
careCorrect article usage
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worker requirement problem it's not just only financial expenses
need
careChange preposition
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workerFix the agreement mistake
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to
support older.
,
other
developed retirement communities to take
olderChange preposition
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,which could make a convenient
toChange preposition
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managementReplace the word
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elderFix the agreement mistake
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and offer comfort
environmentalReplace the word
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as
offerWrong verb form
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nice
facilityFix the agreement mistake
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and 24-hour-a-day,bathing,feeding, laundry etc.
The communities have paid a high expense it,but a part of people
enough money burden it,I think it will big problem with
currentlyChange the adverb
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society
themChange the pronoun
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must found
solutionAdd an article
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