The increasing of private car lead to high level of pollution. Do you agree with this statement and what can be done to solve this problem?

Nowadays there is a huge

problem

of

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number of private

cars

, which lead to

pollution

of

environment

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. Some people believe, that

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is

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relevant topic to discuss and

to

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solve

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,

however

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others

thinks

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that it is not a big issue.

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with, it is worth to be mentioned,

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absolutely agree with the statement, that

rapidly

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growing number of personal vehicles no depts causing

a

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pollution

of

environment

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the environment

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. The more

cars

are on the road the more it harms our planet. In my opinion, there are a lot of ways to solve the high-level

pollution

problem

.

Firstly

, we need to reduce

amount

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of privet

cars

in one family and use more public transport

such

as buses, underground or to use one cat together. Nowadays some families which consist of 3-4 members have two or more

cars

, and I suppose that it is no right when you’re a living in a city.

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, if three persons are driving one car, they are causing less damage to the earth,

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if they are driving in three separate

cars

.

Secondly

, humanity can use

electric

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an electric

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car

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instead

of petrol

cars

, it will reduce air

pollution

.

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, a huge amount of

cars

causing

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only

problem

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problems

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with the environment, but

also

a lack of parking places, traffic jams etc. In

conclusion

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I would like to say, that the increasing number of private

cars

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the

last

20 years became

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relevant topic to discuss. As it was already mentioned people can and must solve

this

problem

otherwise

, sooner or later

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humanity will understand that there is nothing left to

breath

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with.