Companies should provide sports and social facilities for local communities. To what extent do you agree?
Some people believe that corporates are obligated to build sports and social
facilities
such
as badminton courts or schools for their neighborhood
. I only agree with Change the spelling
neighbourhood
this
statement to a certain extent as there are numerous advantages and disadvantages in doing so. This
will be further
explained in the following paragraphs.
Firstly
, corporations that are willing to provide spaces for sports and community work can have a chance to increase their publicity in their respective neighborhood
. Change the spelling
neighbourhood
This
can be done by including names or logos of the companies
in the facilities
provided, so people are aware of the contributors. As a result
, people who are using the local facilities
are more likely to purchase products and services from whichever companies
that
built them.
Correct pronoun usage
apply
Secondly
, companies
can gain more loyal employees in the local areas by offering them and their families free entry to the facilities
. For example
, companies
can build badminton courts open to the public with fees applicable, but free of charge for their workers and families. This
can effectively make employees feel valued by the corporates which make
them more willing to work hard, Correct subject-verb agreement
makes
thus
increasing output and revenue for the businesses.
On the other hand
, it is definitely not the companies
' responsibility to provide amenities in the local areas. This
should be the government's job as they have enough capitals
from the taxpayers' money. Fix the agreement mistake
capital
Moreover
, opening facilities
requires immense funds in building them and providing long-term maintenance such
as cleaning or fixing broken equipment in the facilities
.
In conclusion, I agree partially that it would be beneficial for the companies
to provide amenities for their respective neighborhoods
as it could be a way to advertise themselves and gain public recognition. Change the spelling
neighbourhoods
However
, corporates must have enough capitals
in order to do so.Fix the agreement mistake
capital
Submitted by ktchien104 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+
Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!