A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans ,while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs ,including uses for food and research.

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Animals

' right has become a topical issue in recent time. An

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number of persons are of the opinion that

animals

should be treated with dignity, as they have

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fundamental rights as the people, while others believe that they are to be used by

humans

for nourishment and for scientific purposes. There are valid points on both

side

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of the debate and

this

essay will be discussing them and give a concluding opinion.* *On the one hand, those who argue that

animals

should not be exploited by people, do so because of the belief that these creatures experience pain as a human does. They believe that when we kill or carry out experiments on

animals

, they feel severe pain and suffering that equates

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of

humans

.

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, a study carried out in the US , showed that for each animal killed in the wild, about 3 of its

first

degree relatives die within weeks. To the proponents of

this

idea, the evidence is convincing.* *

On the other hand

, those who believe that

animals

should be used by human as they please, cite the fact these creatures

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in

life saving

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researches

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which cannot be carried out on

humans

. Since it is ethically wrong to test new medicines directly on

humans

, most novel drugs and vaccines are

first

tested on some

animals

in other to ascertain their viability.

For instance

, the cholera vaccine was

first

tested on rats in other to know if it is safe for human consumption.

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for a country to progress,

she

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needs healthy citizens and consuming

animals

as part of a nourishment guarantees that. Animal exploitation is

thus

a positive event.* *In conclusion, despite the fact that

animals

may

poses

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some humanlike feelings , their roles in drug research and nutrition would make me support the fact they must be employed to meet various human needs.*