Some people think there should be free health care for all the people, but other disagree. Discuss both sides.

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Healthcare is an important
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now-a-days
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.
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is, directly or indirectly, related to productivity. Without
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good
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health
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a man can’t burgeon in his or her life. That’s why
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reconned the most precious wealth of the planet earth. So, a person’s productivity is tantamount to a
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countries
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overall economic growth. That’s why governments of various
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take lots of initiative to ameliorate the
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care
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system
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of the country and they put public
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the paramount.
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care
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of
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all
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are
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not the same. Many
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subsidies the
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care
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system
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, others don’t.
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trend, subsidization of
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care
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,
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visible in most
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the developed country. But the 3rd world
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are still left behind
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race, as they don’t have that
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resources to spend money
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health
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care
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. Their per
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income
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is also not sufficed
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not suffice which in long run
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the
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govt. spending. There are lots of schemes
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health
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systems and
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may be
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it is good for the economy
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the long term as it increases
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productivity. But there are some discrepancies between
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group
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about
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free
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for all the
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. According to one group, it’s absolutely
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best option for the country to make their
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care
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free and at the same
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it makes the
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easily accessible and open to all the
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. No
people
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have to face any kind of discrimination regarding
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care
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. And overall, it begets
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bonanza for the economy. But according to other
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it has many disadvantages too. Free
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care
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to all would mean
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belongs
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to any
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get the same facility and the upper
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who has the ability to buy medical
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don’t need to pay any penny
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purpose. So,
government
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should make a vivid policy based on the
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. The policy
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gives the lower-
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highest
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opportunity and the upper
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gets the lowest. In
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way, we can ensure
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equal opportunity
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our
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and brings
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phenomenal growth
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the economy.
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