In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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access to

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they live. It is anticipated that in the future,

people

will no longer buy printed newspapers or

books

. In

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people

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to read news, articles and

books

People

are becoming more self-aware about the environment and the negative impact that

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cooperation

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causing.

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, a lot of

people

are trying to

roduce

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the amount of

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they are

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and use evnvirpemt-safe

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products

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Printable

materials,

such

books

and magazines, require a lot of papers that are being produced from trees. The less we use

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, the

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trees will be cut down.

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, a lot of

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provided

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solution

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to encourage their employees to print

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documents and rely on soft copies. In another hand, accessing these

books

and magazines online is much

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easer

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and

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you less to

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charge. Reading them online can be done at

anytime

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anywhere you want. You

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or a library to buy it.

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people

will pay less

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and have

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limitless

access to the magazine or book their buying. In some

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the access will be free of charge.

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why

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people

are more

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online

vertions

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versions

instead

of the soft copies. In

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conclusion

people

will shift to

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to read

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favorit

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favourite

books

and magazines due to its positive impact on the

enviroemtn

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environment

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, they are

accessable

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accessible

easly

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easily

easy

and cost less.

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2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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cultural value
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Fully explain your ideas

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Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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