Some think Increasing businss and culture contact between nations is positive. Other thinks it needs to disappearance of identity.

Globalization is a need of the era. It helps in providing jobs to the citizens.
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it gives us an opportunity to exchange our culture with other nations.
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, a bunch of people are really optimistic about it whereas the other thinks it has a negative impact. I agree with the latter part. In the upcoming paragraphs, one is going to discuss both views and evolve a conclusion from them.
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with, Globalization is vital for the development of a country and has a plethora of advantages too; It helps in boosting the economy of an area.
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eventually improve the standard of living of the citizens.
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, connection with other nations helps in cultural exchange. Have you ever wondered why, despite Indian food having a variety of options available, why Indians have still accepted foreign cuisines widely? All thanks to the movement
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taking place in recent years.
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, the development has brought a few disadvantages too.
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, today’s generation has been influenced a lot by western culture. The influence has made them forget about our roots, history, and ancient knowledge.
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, Even for a minor fever, we tend to rely on medicines emerged by modern science whereas our ancient books have the causes, and precautions along with the home remedies mentioned.
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, people are forgetting their legacy. They are forgetting the skills which are learned by their elders by sacrificing their blood and sweat.
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, in earlier times, the bangles were handmade. But today there are only a few families have continued their hundreds of years old business. To conclude, Everyone wants to grow, be it a country or an individual. The development should be done by keeping our history in mind. Today, wherever we stand, we are thankful for what our ancestors have discovered.

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