News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this?

As technology increases, the trend of
news
with
images
and videos is
also
increasing. The editor used
images
either with the latest
news
or with more valuable
news
. I believe that the
news
with an image has more effect on the watcher.
Firstly
, an image with
news
in the newspaper describes the latest
news
. By looking at the
images
you can know that current affairs. latest or anything which effect society printed with
images
on the
first
page.
Thus
, a reader can find what is taking effect in their culture.
Secondly
,
a
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news
with
image
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attracts the reader.
For example
, when you see your favourite celebrity photo on
news paper
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newspaper
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,you
first
saw that
news
over other
news
.
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always print
most
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the most
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recent and more valuable
news
with
images
on
first
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page. It
also
describe
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which
news
are
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more
imprtant
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important
than others.
Thus
, A photo
effects
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the message given by
news
and
atract
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attract
the user.
Lastly
, some
news
can not
be fully explain
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be fully explained
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with
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the worlds
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worlds
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words
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.
For instance
, the
news
for
fload
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flood
load
float
in any area. The video
explain
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the situation of the people
at
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in
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that area much better than
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the worlds
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worlds
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world
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. It
also
help
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helps
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increase the contribution
for
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the
socail
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social
survice
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service
services
programe
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programme
program
which helps the people in
bad
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situation.
Thus
, it
also
describe
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the
ructh
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rush
truth
to
public
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the public
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.
To
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consclude
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conclude
, I would say that
,
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images
define the
weigth
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weight
of
news
and it is
laso
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also
used to attract the public towards
a
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news
.
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  • empathize
  • instantaneous comprehension
  • irrefutable evidence
  • transcend language barriers
  • overreliance
  • oversimplification
  • misinformation
  • desensitizing
  • nuance
  • in-depth analysis
  • symbiotic relationship
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