Nowadays, celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the present days, the glamour and prosperity of renowned persons are more being recognised
than
their achievements. Correct quantifier usage
more than
This
phenomenon has sparked heated debate among individuals Linking Words
they
imitate their celebrities even without thinking Correct pronoun usage
who
whether
it is appropriate for Change preposition
about whether
their
or not. Correct pronoun usage
them
In
my standpoint, I totally agree with Change preposition
From
this
statement. The forthcoming paragraphs elucidate the relevant reasons with examples to support my opinion.
To embarkLinking Words
on
, if Change preposition
apply
i
talk about the film Change the capitalization
I
stars
of the present day, they are not spreading any informative and productive information to their followers. To explain it, Youngsters nowadays Use synonyms
spending
precious time Wrong verb form
spend
read
about Change the form of the verb
reading
Use synonyms
stars
life by surfing Change noun form
stars'
star's
on
the internet, watching videos, and the movies of favourite Change preposition
apply
stars
; Use synonyms
as
Correct word choice
apply
today's
most Change noun form
today
of
Change preposition
apply
movies
are of offensive nature Add an article
the movies
such
as, Linking Words
on
crime and robbery and watching that material, they only able to learn unlawful behaviour from them. Change preposition
apply
Moreover
, Young people imitate Linking Words
Correct your spelling
habits
habbits
of personalities without even knowing their pros and cons. Correct article usage
the habbits
As a result
, they get misled and opt for Linking Words
aweful
behaviour Correct your spelling
awful
that is
unlawful towards society.
Linking Words
Furthermore
, despite Linking Words
from
film Change preposition
apply
stars
, these days sports Use synonyms
player
Fix the agreement mistake
players
Linking Words
also
more inclined towards prosperity rather than games and showing their talent, because they spend precious time signing up with advertisements companies and earning money. Add a missing verb
are also
Consequently
, it Linking Words
persude
their followers in Correct your spelling
persuade
wrong
direction, they always have a thought that Change the article
the wrong
are
only minting money and enjoying their life. Change the verb form
is
Therefore
, youngsters would learn them, being international players is just earning money while playing. Linking Words
For example
, Linking Words
survey
shows Correct article usage
a survey
40
per cent of sports Correct word choice
that 40
person
Fix the agreement mistake
people
taking
drugs while taking part in international or national games. Wrong verb form
take
As a result
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which
are misleading the individuals by persuading them in Correct pronoun usage
they
wrong
direction.
To sum up, Change the article
the wrong
although
in Linking Words
90s
famous personalities were known for their work, talent, and achievements in the different roles they played, in my opinion, nowadays a very few renowned persons are barely known for their accomplishments.Correct article usage
the 90s
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