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Explain why not fooling oneself is necessary for scientist. Why might it be easy for scientists to make the mistake of fooling themselves? How might scientists guard against this mistake?

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Nowaday
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Nowadays
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 Science has been
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 to solve
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 and develops facilities to help many people around the world. But some
scientist
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 use science for their own benefit, And it‘s
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 a bad thing. Here is why.
Scientist
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 can fool everyone even themselves to make some benefit. Or maybe some of it might
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,
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 people misunderstand something that
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. So a
scientist
 must not fool oneself. The reason why it‘s so easy for scientists to make the mistake of fooling themselves is, They have a lot of ego in their
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. The ego can make everyone be
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. For scientists, It
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 of not
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 to anyone but themselves. Or possibly
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 the experiment which hasn‘t got a repeat
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 the research which hasn‘t check. So it could make people misunderstand. The way to guard
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 mistake is
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scientist
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 the research and experiment Carefully. Do not judge anything with
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bias. That‘s all,
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