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Some people feel that entertainers (eg film stars, pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of jobs should be highly paid?

Many
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 feel the same way that individuals who work as entertainers
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 as film stars, pop musicians or sports stars are paid too much. I strongly agree with
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 statement.
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 should be highly paid, and a conclusion
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.
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,
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 with, the reason for the individuals to soar the excessive
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 of income is fan following and the extreme
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 of talent they have.
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, Michael Jackson's shows attracted millions of
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 than any other event could.
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, sports stars these days are paid a huge
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 per match that I think is too much for them. I agree with the fact they make their country proud but, with
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amount
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 I guess anyone can do it and a similar is the case with pop musicians in today's world.
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,
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 are inclining more and more toward
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 individuals who tend to entertain the mass public.
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, I believe, there are other types of
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 too that require some serious attention
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 as doctors, army men, and policemen.
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, they are the core members in protecting our country from an outside attack and they deserve a lot more than they usually get. Government should consider their job to be one of the highest-paid, and
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 should respect more them rather than entertainers. The reason is the entertainer can make you laugh once, but these
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 can save your life.
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, these are the
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 that should be highly paid as becoming one of them is a very difficult choice. In conclusion, I agree nowadays entertainers are being highlypaiduu, in fact, they make the whole use of the money.
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 there are some serious
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 done by a few
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 too in providing security to the country which can't be neglected.

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