Some people feel that entertainers (eg film stars, pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of jobs should be highly paid?
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of talent they have. Use synonyms
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I guess anyone can do it and a similar is the case with pop musicians in today's world. Use synonyms
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individuals who tend to entertain the mass public.
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Furthermore
, they are the core members in protecting our country from an outside attack and they deserve a lot more than they usually get. Government should consider their job to be one of the highest-paid, and Linking Words
people
should respect more them rather than entertainers. The reason is the entertainer can make you laugh once, but these Use synonyms
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can save your life. Use synonyms
Thus
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that should be highly paid as becoming one of them is a very difficult choice.
In conclusion, I agree nowadays entertainers are being highlypaiduu, in fact, they make the whole use of the money. Use synonyms
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too in providing security to the country which can't be neglected.Use synonyms
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