Some people feel that entertainers (eg film stars, pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of jobs should be highly paid?
Many
people
feel the same way that individuals who work as entertainers such
as film stars, pop musicians or sports stars are paid too much. I strongly agree with this
statement. This
essay will discuss the statement and will talk about which other types of jobs
should be highly paid, and a conclusion thereafter
.
Firstly
, to begin
with, the reason for the individuals to soar the excessive amount
of income is fan following and the extreme amount
of talent they have. For example
, Michael Jackson's shows attracted millions of people
than any other event could. In addition
, sports stars these days are paid a huge amount
per match that I think is too much for them. I agree with the fact they make their country proud but, with this
amount
I guess anyone can do it and a similar is the case with pop musicians in today's world. As a result
, people
are inclining more and more toward such
individuals who tend to entertain the mass public.
However
, I believe, there are other types of jobs
too that require some serious attention such
as doctors, army men, and policemen. Furthermore
, they are the core members in protecting our country from an outside attack and they deserve a lot more than they usually get. Government should consider their job to be one of the highest-paid, and people
should respect more them rather than entertainers. The reason is the entertainer can make you laugh once, but these people
can save your life. Thus
, these are the jobs
that should be highly paid as becoming one of them is a very difficult choice.
In conclusion, I agree nowadays entertainers are being highlypaiduu, in fact, they make the whole use of the money. Although
there are some serious jobs
done by a few people
too in providing security to the country which can't be neglected.Submitted by vaibhavvarshney67 on
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