Mrs Barret, an English-speaking woman who lives in your hometown, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barret. In your letter - Suggest how you could help her in her home - Say why you would like to do this work - Explain when you will and will not be available

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Dear Mrs Barret, I am writing

this

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letter to express my interest

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the job that

published

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the local newspaper. I could assist you during my spare time. I am a student pursuing

bachelor's

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in engineering, I am good at daily household chores. I was helping my parents

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with

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cooking, chopping vegetables, gardening and cleaning.

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, I am

expertised

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wall

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and floor painting,

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can reshape your walls as per your interest. I have my own benefits with

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job.

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and foremost, I want to improve my English language skills

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I recently migrated and do not have enough friends in

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country,

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way I can gradually make more contacts here and master

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English.

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, I am addicted to social media and

watchin

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watching

TV, I spend

entire

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day watching so want to come out

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this

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by spending my extra time effectively at your

loaction

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location

. During the

weekedays

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, I am occupied with the classroom sessions in the morning, I will be available in the evenings

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and fully dedicate on weekends. Please feel free to schedule an interview at your convenient time. Your's sincerely, Rana Anh

rana Fri Jun 03 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

191 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

assistance
household duties
errands
meal preparation
cultural exchange
time management
availability
commitments
scheduling
cleaning regimen
organizing
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