Mrs Barret, an English-speaking woman who lives in your hometown, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barret. In your letter - Suggest how you could help her in her home - Say why you would like to do this work - Explain when you will and will not be available

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Dear Mrs Barret, I am writing
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letter to express my interest
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the job that
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the local newspaper. I could assist you during my spare time. I am a student pursuing
bachelor's
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in engineering, I am good at daily household chores. I was helping my parents
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cooking, chopping vegetables, gardening and cleaning.
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, I am
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expertise
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wall
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and floor painting,
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can reshape your walls as per your interest. I have my own benefits with
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job.
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and foremost, I want to improve my English language skills
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I recently migrated and do not have enough friends in
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country,
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way I can gradually make more contacts here and master
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English.
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, I am addicted to social media and
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watching
TV, I spend
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day watching so want to come out
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by spending my extra time effectively at your
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location
. During the
weekedays
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weekdays
, I am occupied with the classroom sessions in the morning, I will be available in the evenings
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and fully dedicate on weekends. Please feel free to schedule an interview at your convenient time. Your's sincerely, Rana Anh
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • assistance
  • household duties
  • errands
  • meal preparation
  • cultural exchange
  • time management
  • availability
  • commitments
  • scheduling
  • cleaning regimen
  • organizing
  • part-time help
  • interpersonal skills
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