A Museum Near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary / unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary / unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary / unpaid work. In your letter - explain why you want to do voluntary / unpaid work at the museum - describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful - give details of when you would be available for work

People complain that it’s hard to have enough sleep recently which will result in many negative effects.
Such
situation
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will take risks
for
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our
life
which can be solved by discipline. In the following
content
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I will give details about
this
point. Lack of sleep will result in many series
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of outcome
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outcome
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which will affect our
life
. It will embody
in
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two aspects. Including physical and psychological problems. In
such
way
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, our immune system will get weaker and can’t provide firmly prevention for us against
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the virus
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virus
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which will let us
get
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sick.
For example
, I used to be
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a headache
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headache
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and got
cough
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after I sleep
to
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late and get up too early which will lead to little sleep time.
On the other hand
, our mental situation will
also
be very bad in
such
condition
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. Less sleep means our brain can not acquire enough rest time. So
the
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functions of it will be
unharmony
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in harmony
inharmony
.
Such
as, It will make our neutral reaction become very slow and
then
we could lose
the
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concentration on some important events.
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, once up a time, I took part in an essential business meeting.
However
, I forget to
taking
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the bid documents which I spend a long night
to prepare
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.
This
fault
result
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from lacking sleep
let
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me be fired. We should deal with
this
problem by cultivating a healthy
life
habit
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. We can arrange a
harmony
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biological clock and prohibit intaking some food which will affect our sleep.
For instance
, going to bed before eleven o’clock pm no matter what
happen
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,
then
getting up at seven o’clock am.
Moreover
, one hour before our sleeping, we should not smoke and eat some sweet cake or sugar. In conclusion, Lack of sleep will lead to many serious problems in our
life
but it can be
came
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up with by living under
a good habits
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good habits
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.
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Enthusiastic
  • Volunteer
  • Part-time
  • Unpaid work
  • Museum director
  • Skills and qualities
  • Customer service
  • Organization
  • Team player
  • Flexible
  • Reliable
  • Positive attitude
  • Availability
  • Professional goals
  • Community contribution
  • References
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