As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work , job satisfaction is an important element of individual well-being.

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vital aspect of one's self
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happy life.To be satisfied with a
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,many expectations need to be fulfilled.I think that delight
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remains a distant dream for the majority of employees. To
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with,the
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point is that an individual
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a
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that matches his skill set and where he could find
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mental satisfaction.While a
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that provides a sense of
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,
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working environment and pays well is a desired
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for many.Traditionally,a
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social status,better pay norm and gives freedom to
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is said to be dream
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jobs
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.Some
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factors like adequate holidays, learning
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,career growth,
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decent Boss behaviour, nice co-workers,
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security and
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working environment are often considered the most important aspects of a
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.In fact,
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nice work should guarantee progress.
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, training courses that help
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gain new skills would help improve
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career and
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benefit
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workplace and
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community as well.
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,work enjoyment and expectation of workers change with time.It is almost unrealistic to define
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a
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which is perfect and completely satisfactory for all.
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,some people
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with their
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because of poor
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complain about the future prospect.Even if these criteria are met in
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.Every workplace has its
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unique culture and style.
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the workers should adapt and adjust themselves to
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environment. In conclusion,It is true that adults are spending a lot of their time at work.
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gratisfaction
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gratification
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happiness but some are realistic while
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are just not
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