Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertianment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decesions about matters that affect them. Dicuss both these views and give you own opinion.

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have various options about

children

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should choose their daily matters

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as choosing food what they like to eat, clothes what they like to wear or not. It has

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a controversial topic whereas some

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think it will lead to a selfish society with

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who will only think

themsleves

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themselves

while other

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hold the option that it will increase the confidence and

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of

children

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and they will become the responsible adults in the future.

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of all, the opponents of

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phenomenon highlight that

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letting choose whatever

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want to do, it will make a habit of only looking for

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their

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and causes them to become egocentric

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. By virtue of that, they will have a thought that they are the centre of the universe.

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,

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cannot

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everything that their

children

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ask for because of different

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scenarios

. For

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, expensive food and

colthes

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clothes

cannot be afforded by

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with financial constraints or junk foods and snacks that are too sweet are not really

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appropriate

for

children

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's health and in these matters,

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should not let them have whatever they want.

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, the advocates point out that if

children

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can choose or do the things without depending on their

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since they were young, they will have hardly

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any difficulties

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with problems that will be encountered in the future.

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, they will have a sense of choice even at

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early age and their own styles or likes rather than chosen by their mothers.

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, they are more

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to be decisive compared to the ones who are selected

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by

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guardians.

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, those will be leaders in their fields of

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future

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since their

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decisions

are precise and perfect. In a nutshell, I pen down saying that merits of permitting

children

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to choose have overwhelmed its

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demerits

and

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,

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will lead

children

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to become better persons.