Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertianment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decesions about matters that affect them. Dicuss both these views and give you own opinion.
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People
have various options about children
should choose their daily matters such
as choosing food what they like to eat, clothes what they like to wear or not. It has been become
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become
people
think it will lead to a selfish society with people
who will only think themsleves
while other Correct your spelling
themselves
people
hold the option that it will increase the confidence and independency
of Correct your spelling
independence
children
and they will become the responsible adults in the future.
First
of all, the opponents of this
phenomenon highlight that by
letting choose whatever Change preposition
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children
want to do, it will make a habit of only looking for about
their Change preposition
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sakes
and causes them to become egocentric Fix the agreement mistake
sake
people
. By virtue of that, they will have a thought that they are the centre of the universe. Moreover
, parents
cannot fulfill
everything that their Change the spelling
fulfil
children
ask for because of different scienrios
. For Correct your spelling
scenarios
examples
, expensive food and Fix the agreement mistake
example
colthes
cannot be afforded by Correct your spelling
clothes
parents
with financial constraints or junk foods and snacks that are too sweet are not really appropirate
for Correct your spelling
appropriate
children
's health and in these matters, parents
should not let them have whatever they want.
On the other hand
, the advocates point out that if children
can choose or do the things without depending on their parents
since they were young, they will have hardly difficulties
with problems that will be encountered in the future. Correct quantifier usage
any difficulties
Also
, they will have a sense of choice even at their
early age and their own styles or likes rather than chosen by their mothers. Change the word
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Furthermore
, they are more Correct your spelling
likely
likey
to be decisive compared to the ones who are selected Correct your spelling
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guardians. Correct your spelling
their
Consequently
, those will be leaders in their fields of fututre
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future
carrers
since their Correct your spelling
careers
carriers
decesions
are precise and perfect.
In a nutshell, I pen down saying that merits of permitting Correct your spelling
decisions
children
to choose have overwhelmed its demrits
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demerits
as a result
, this
will lead children
to become better persons.Submitted by ivvitest3 on
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