Some people believe that robots will play an important role in future societies, while others argue that robots might have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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A lot of residents in the world think about how

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in modern societies;

however

robots

will be affected negatively

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some issues in society. In

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discuss both opinions about

robots

First

of all, the benefit of

robotics

in people's lives can make

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to work. Some of the job employees

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will be reduced when the office combines workers and

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For example

, in industrial job manufacturing vehicles, the robot can be assembling the chassis and people in the office in the finishing part,

such

as painting or in the final check.

Secondly

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public transportation in the future

use

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robotics

to replace the driver.

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autonomous

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in the big cities. It will reduce crashes because one of the reasons for crashes is human error.

Finally

, the benefit of

robots

can change house chores. In some online shops, it was available that sell goods using

robotics

In contrast

, people will be lazy because all of the jobs already use

robots

. The residents can stay calm and have nothing competition in the office.

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, make

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apathetic

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to the environment by not joining other neighbours. In conclusion,

robotics

can be helpful for humans nowadays

such

as in workers or households.

However

, we must be careful about the negative impact that

robotics

can improve massively.

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Some people believe that robots will play an important role in future societies, while others argue that robots might have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Fully explain your ideas

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Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life.