It will be better to have wide use of driverless car for individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

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Over the past few decades, the world has seen a sea-change in technology. Modern technical enhancements have taken place that has increased the comfort of human. One

such

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invention is the self-driving car. I consider

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evaluation a miracle. In the upcoming paragraphs, one is going to discuss the

merit

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and demerits of the same and evolve a conclusion from them. Advantage Safety will be improved. 94% of the accidents are

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human errors The machine does not get tired

hence

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Long journeys will become comfortable No

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and

drive

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risk Traffic rules will be followed Improve the mobility of those who can’t drive Disadvantages Drivers will be jobless Anything which operates through technology can be hacked. The intervention of threat cannot be controlled. Research and development have a huge cost Maintenance

cost

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higher The weather can create an obstacle. A bad atmosphere may Interrupt the machines to work properly.

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, there are a plethora of advantages

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to the disadvantages.

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enhancements are a demand of the era and features like auto-pilot mode are helping society in several ways

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prevention

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the prevention

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of fatal accidents, less pollution, etc.

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

193 words

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