Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

In

this

contemporary world,

traffic

jam is a brutal issue around the world where people spent their valuable time In their daily routines.

Moreover

, it has paved the way to create

pollution

problems in

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. Some argued that a productive solution to mitigate

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traffic

problem is the price of petrol should want to

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. I will compl6 disagree above statement and I will elaborate

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opinion in

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paragraphs.

To begin

with, private vehi9 usage

are

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increased enormously compared to the past. As wherever people In their busy lifestyles always tried to acquire save their time

however

, in day-to-day life they have faced

traffic

jams and are not able to do their work schedules in a fruitful manner. Particularly, it caused to increase

level

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of

pollution

in a detrimental way.

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, an Indian survey shows that the

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country high usage of personal transport escalated the air

pollution

by 70%

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every year.

As a result

, we have to face health issues asthma and other breathing problems, unable to make our daily routines

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a beneficial way to enhance our living standards.

Furthermore

, wherever governments in every nation have implemented new rules and regulations to tackle

this crucial

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this crucial traffic problem

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traffic

problems. Increasing petrol

prize

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is not a rational solution because humans have tried to afford anyway to get it, to mitigate their

time consuming

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in their busy lifestyle. As a

solution

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local authorities can develop the public transport services

ensure

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bthe

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the

be

reduce

traffic

jams.

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,

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is

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eco-friendly transport method and can be able to use

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by

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a cheap price.

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, local authorities can develop facilities

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this

method to ensure the public

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concern

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about

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traffic

jams.

Consequently

, it helps to reduce

pollution

as well as road accidents

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everywhere

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every where

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. In conclusion, from my perspective, I believe if we try to decline our usage of private vehicles, we will have

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opportunity to mitigate

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issue from our life. Even though government want to

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plans and schemes for

this

, wherever citizens have attempted to follow these for a better tomorrow.