Some say that the standard of behavior among children has worsened and this is their parents' faults, others say that schools are be blame. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Without a denying, with the universal education, a widely heated debate as to whether the

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deviation of

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attributed to

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or

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has received great attention from the public. Whereas some people are holding identical opinions toward the statement, from my point of view, I am in

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of the

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of the family and a myriad of reasons will be elaborated on as follows. On the one hand, an array of reasons could be seen for

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.

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of all,

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spend most of the day at

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;

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,

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have the

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to look after and discipline

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's

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.

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,

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pay tuition to

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and hand over their beloved

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to institutions.

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,

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have worsened which is the

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' fault.

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, as far as I am concerned, the

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of the

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with respect to educating

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is supported by several reasons.

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with, family education plays an indispensable role in

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's growth compared to the role of the

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. To be more specific,

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ought to take care of and cultivate their

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rather than shirk the

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to others including the

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, and cram

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. As a consequence, family affects profoundly their

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to determine whether

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have well

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or not. To sum up, based on the aforementioned, even though some people are in favour of the faulty have more

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to train the

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;

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, in my opinion, I am holding an opposite opinion and still deeply convinced that the

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affect

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's mental and physical development profoundly.