In most countries, prison is an effective solution to the problem of crime. Some people think it is a more effective solution to provide a better education. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

It is argued that imprisonment is a significant way to tackle the

crime

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problem whether other thinks that education is a revolutionary step in

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field. I personally feel prison is the best place for criminals because it creates

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among them and

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makes law and order.

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, putting criminals behind the bars is a great idea to stop

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. It is not only punishment for criminals but

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lessons for other offenders.

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,In recent survey shows that 90% of people follow

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because of the

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of punishment which is the only reason

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should be hard for all to maintain the peace in the

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.

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, the other main reason is to make the law and order in the

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because

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are very important to put the public in a disciplinary manner. Without the

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of punishment, people don't follow any system which is well fairness to them.

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, communities break traffic

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they get injured and

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increase

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in

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,

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, prisons are very essential in

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. In conclusion,

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education can change the world in a position way, prisons make the

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of organized

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which is very important to stop wrongdoing and maintain a peaceful world .