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More and more plastic is polluting cities, countryside and oceans. What are the problems caused by plastic waste? What measures should be taken to solve it?

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Plastic
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 has been a major factor of pollution recently, as numerous plastics are being dumped into land and oceans, the
food
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 supply and
food
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 chain can be affected.
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, the government can set some policies to solve
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 problem.
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 with,
plastic
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 wastes can result in both land pollution and water pollution. As
plastic
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 can not be decomposed easily, it will be stuck in fields or water for decades or centuries. In
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 way, soil erosion can be exacerbated as the underground
plastic
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 impedes the transformation of nutrition.
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, poor harvest can eventually develop into crap shortage.
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, the
food
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 chain can be damaged.
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, if marine animals eat
the toxic substances flow
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the flow of the toxic substance
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 in rivers or oceans, they can be poisoned or cannot breathe.
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, the artificial dead owning to
plastic
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 wastes will limit the number of pray and cause undesirable changes in the
food
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 chain. To solve
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 problem, tax can be added to those who use lots of plastics.
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, the state can turn
molded
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 bags which offer in shops into goods
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 of free goods. In
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 way, the use of
plastic
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 bags may be reduced as people need to pay for them.
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, the government can take the
plastic
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 recycling plans. To be precise, citizens can recycle the plastics by putting them into special boxes where money will be returned depending on the weight of the recycled
plastic
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. In conclusion, the overuse of
plastic
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 can damage the land and water which bring negative effects on human life. The government can apply taxes and
plastic
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 recycling plans as solutions to cope with these problems.
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