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In marriages today, some argue that it is the responsibility of both spouses to earn a living for the family. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is being opined by some people that it is an obligation on
couples
 equally to earn money for the family after their marriage. I vehemently espouse that employed married
couples
 can be conducive for
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 since they can ensure a good social and financial status in society.
To begin
 with, in order to ensure
financial
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 stability of the family, it may be the duty of both spouses to earn money. To explain, in the current era, where
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inflation is being observed by every nation, it can be difficult for one person to put all the responsibility for earning money.
Hence
, if both spouses start to earn for
family
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, it may lead them to gain a good economical state in the future.
In addition
, when married
couples
 work for the family,
this
 can ramp up a better understanding
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 their relationships.
Such
couples
 feel no hesitation to help each other
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 domestic chores to reach
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 in time and
this
 thing
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 the chances of conflicts of thoughts in them.
For instance
, A survey conducted by The Guardian newspaper in March 2015 revealed that there was a 35% decrease in the fights and misunderstanding cases had been observed among married working
couples
. On the other side, some people raise a concern about the care of children of married working
couples
. Because when parents work for
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 families, they have less time for their children so kids may feel a lot of
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 mentally and physically.
For example
, children may feel
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 and sometime they may indulge themselves
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 bad company due to
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 of supervision by their working parents.
Hence
, some family time on weekends or having dinner together can be a solution for
this
. To conclude, I completely agree that for
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strong social and financial conditions, it is certainly
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 responsibility of both spouses to earn for
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their families.
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