Examine the arguments in favour and against animal experiments, and come to a conclusion on this issue.
Nowadays,
animals
are used in many experiments
for various reasons and causes. Especially Some of those experiments
are conducted in the fields of medicine
and cosmetic. This
is kind of act is unavoidable because it possesses various advantages for humans whereas it also
cascades some disadvantages by this
act. This
essay will discuss both views and conclude at the end.
Firstly
, development in the medical industry is much important for the human race to survival
. Replace the word
survive
Hence
deploying the animals
under trial for a new medicine
is inevitable. For example
, any new medicine
must be tested before being used as a medicine
for humans. whereas, if it is tested directly on the people may lead to adverse effects.
To avoid such
unnecessary difficulties, trials on animals
are required especially in the field of medicine
and cosmetics.
On the other hand
, some industries are forcing animals
into the worst experiments
without any mercy. which leads them to serious conditions and sometimes death may occur to those animals
. For instance
, some cosmetic companies are engaging animals
in various experiments
to test their products. Due to such
experiments
few Add a comma
,experiments
animals
are lost their lives and some are seriously injured for lifetime
. Add an article
a lifetime
Also
they will keep those Add a comma
,Also
animals
in their captive to use them in the
future trials. Those conditions make them worse.
In conclusion, using Correct article usage
apply
animals
for an experiment is unavoidable because it will help to invent new medicine
, at the same time cruelty to the animals
is unacceptable. In my opinion, we must frame strong rules to curb such
tortures
Fix the agreement mistake
torture
on
Change preposition
of
the
Correct article usage
apply
animals
. So that we can make a way for a better society.Submitted by gopiiatindia on
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