Examine the arguments in favour and against animal experiments, and come to a conclusion on this issue.

Nowadays,
animals
are used in many
experiments
for various reasons and causes. Especially Some of those
experiments
are conducted in the fields of
medicine
and cosmetic.
This
is kind of act is unavoidable because it possesses various advantages for humans whereas it
also
cascades some disadvantages by
this
act.
This
essay will discuss both views and conclude at the end.
Firstly
, development in the medical industry is much important for the human race to
survival
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.
Hence
deploying the
animals
under trial for a new
medicine
is inevitable.
For example
, any new
medicine
must be tested before being used as a
medicine
for humans. whereas, if it is tested directly on the people may lead to adverse effects. To avoid
such
unnecessary difficulties, trials on
animals
are required especially in the field of
medicine
and cosmetics.
On the other hand
, some industries are forcing
animals
into the worst
experiments
without any mercy. which leads them to serious conditions and sometimes death may occur to those
animals
.
For instance
, some cosmetic companies are engaging
animals
in various
experiments
to test their products. Due to
such
experiments
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few
animals
are lost their lives and some are seriously injured for
lifetime
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.
Also
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they will keep those
animals
in their captive to use them in
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future trials. Those conditions make them worse. In conclusion, using
animals
for an experiment is unavoidable because it will help to invent new
medicine
, at the same time cruelty to the
animals
is unacceptable. In my opinion, we must frame strong rules to curb
such
tortures
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the
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animals
. So that we can make a way for a better society.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • controversial
  • prevalence
  • scientific research
  • proponents
  • opponents
  • medical breakthroughs
  • vaccines
  • treatments
  • critical data
  • regulatory frameworks
  • ethical guidelines
  • minimize suffering
  • moral objections
  • animal rights
  • species differences
  • unreliable results
  • alternatives to animal testing
  • in vitro testing
  • computer modeling
  • volunteer microdosing
  • nuanced
  • complexity
  • weighing
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