One of your friends wants to apply for a job involving working with foreign teenagers. Write a letter of recommendation for him/her. You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Dear Rahul, Hope
this
letter finds you well and hope you are in good health and high spirits.I am writing
this
letter to give some suggestions to you as I come to know that you have shown interest in working with
forieign
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foreign
youngsters. As you know you just
have
Unnecessary verb
apply
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completed your studies
in
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apply
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last
month if you want to work with western people you should improve your English because you have to communicate
everytime
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every time
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for work and
besides
this
, you should learn some greeting words
such
as hello, welcome because I have seen in my past experience when I went to London Iast year they are very polite and always respectful with greeting person.
Furthermore
, you can start speaking in English with me whenever you are free .So my most important advice is to improve your communication skills and learn some basic etiquette. looking
foward
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forward
to
hear
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hearing
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a positive response from your side. with love Navdeep
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task achievement
Ensure the letter fully addresses the task requirements by including specific recommendations about your friend's eligibility, qualities, and skills for the job. This should reflect a strong recommendation for your friend.
coherence cohesion
Organize your ideas more clearly, ensuring each paragraph focuses on a single aspect of the recommendation. This structured approach will enhance clarity and coherence.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriate for the letter, creating a polite and friendly tone.
task achievement
The writing tone is suitable and reflects a friendly and supportive relationship with your friend.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Recommendation
  • Enthusiastic
  • Cultural sensitivity
  • Empathetic
  • Cross-cultural communication
  • Multicultural experience
  • Patience
  • Adaptability
  • Fluency
  • Interpersonal skills
  • Diversity
  • Understanding
  • Youth engagement
  • Multilingual abilities
  • Professional demeanor
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