One of your friends wants to apply for a job involving working with foreign teenagers. Write a letter of recommendation for him/her. You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Dear Rahul,
Hope
this
letter finds you well and hope you are in good health and high spirits.I am writing this
letter to give some suggestions to you as I come to know that you have shown interest in working with forieign
youngsters.
As you know you just Correct your spelling
foreign
have
completed your studies Unnecessary verb
apply
in
Change preposition
apply
last
month if you want to work with western people you should improve your English because you have to communicate everytime
for work and Replace the word
every time
besides
this
, you should learn some greeting words such
as hello, welcome because I have seen in my past experience when I went to London Iast year they are very polite and always respectful with greeting person.Furthermore
, you can start speaking in English with me whenever you are free .So my most important advice is to improve your communication skills and learn some basic etiquette.
looking foward
to Correct your spelling
forward
hear
a positive response from your side.
with love
NavdeepWrong verb form
hearing
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task achievement
Ensure the letter fully addresses the task requirements by including specific recommendations about your friend's eligibility, qualities, and skills for the job. This should reflect a strong recommendation for your friend.
coherence cohesion
Organize your ideas more clearly, ensuring each paragraph focuses on a single aspect of the recommendation. This structured approach will enhance clarity and coherence.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriate for the letter, creating a polite and friendly tone.
task achievement
The writing tone is suitable and reflects a friendly and supportive relationship with your friend.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,