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Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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It is considered by some that environmental
problems
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 should be tackled globally, while there are others who think that
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problems
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 need to be addressed domestically. In my opinion, I consider that resolving environmental issues globally will be beneficial to both the environment and humans. On the one hand, some people think that it is
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best to solve the issues related to the environment globally and I agree.
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, environmental
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 like global warming which is accounted for catastrophic disasters,
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 as storms, heatwaves and drought affects all
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 around the world and the only solution would be a coordinated response in which all
countries
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 have to work together
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order to overcome
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 problem.
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, the matter of finance can be a key role in these types of situations.
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, developing
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 may struggle to afford the cost of fighting against ecosystem
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 and it can be a financial burden to them, whereas having other
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 in
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 fight can lift the financial burden off the developing
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. Another reason why cooperation of the other
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 is required is that the reduction of greenhouse gas emissions should be agreed upon at international conferences
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 as
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 summit.
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, it is often believed that it is better to deal with
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problems
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 domestically. Certain environmental matters can be only solved by the domestic government.
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, it's the government's responsibility to look after waste disposal and sanitation on top of providing education for their people regarding energy conservation and the importance of recycling.
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, better traffic control policies need to be implemented locally since traffic congestion varies from city to city. In conclusion, while many people vary in their opinions, I think that we stand a better chance to overcome the environmental
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 if they get solved globally and
countries
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 join each other and act as a united force.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • international cooperation
  • sovereign rights
  • Paris Agreement
  • climate change
  • ocean pollution
  • collective measures
  • economic interests
  • political will
  • enforcement issues
  • free-riders
  • tailor-made solutions
  • transboundary pollution
  • resource constraints
  • global frameworks
  • national efforts
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