A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He has asked for your advice about studying this subject.

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Dear Anna, It was nice to hear from you and your desire to study nutrition. I have got some
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for you which I think will help you decide to take the course or not. The subject that I like most
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a restaurant. I am quite sure you know about my
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passion.
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and health
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demands effort and you will get used to
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for hours. At the end of the course you going to
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to decide what fits betters on your personality, maybe you think about looking after people caring
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or going straight to work with
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security. The University is quite excellent in any area you going to choose.
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, I would say that
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at Mc Mills College is the best option nearby. The University has
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the end, your
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job. I am sure that are many available. By now, I would say that
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in is not as easy as we think. In advance you should take
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test, make a good research project and e-mail a Professor,
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required. I am here if you need extra help. Best wishes, Ana B.
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  • prospective student
  • alma mater
  • curriculum
  • faculty
  • state-of-the-art
  • extramural
  • scholarly pursuits
  • cohort
  • accreditations
  • holistic development
  • pedagogy
  • thesis
  • dissertation
  • prerequisites
  • mentorship
  • application portal
  • tuition fees
  • scholarships
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  • internship opportunities
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  • deadline
  • admissions office
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