Many animal species are becoming extinct as a result of human activities. What are the causes and possible solutions to this problem?
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the environment
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animal extinction and give some Remove the preposition
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solution
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solutions
this
problem.
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threes
have been demolished. Threes are the house or the food source for animals. Correct your spelling
trees
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to what I have just said, pollution. It has had dire consequences on their life. Linking Words
For instance
, light pollution disturbs their sleep. On top of that air and water pollution are another contributing factor in killing them. Not Linking Words
last
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green house
gases that leads to global warming. And global warming Correct your spelling
greenhouse
give
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gives
melting
of ice in Correct article usage
the melting
north
and south poles. Correct article usage
the north
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animals which live there are Add a comma
,result
in
dangered.
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effect on their lives, we can come over Add an article
an ill
this
problem by burning less fuel. Linking Words
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human
should be encouraged to use public transportation. Fix the agreement mistake
humans
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instead
of nonrenewable ones. Linking Words
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Desertification
of large areas of the planet.
To conclude, all in all, our Correct article usage
the Desertification
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footprint
foot print
on the earth is really clear. Gone is the idea of the earth will construct itself.Correct your spelling
footprint
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