Investment in local amenities such as leisure centers is the best way for the government to foster a good community spirit. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?
creating happiness sense is one of the duties of each
government
, which is Use synonyms
happy
as well as, a good Replace the word
happiness
spirit
is important for them. making places for ordinary Use synonyms
people
which can spend leisure time Use synonyms
is
a way that grows a happy Correct your spelling
in
spirit
in society. In Use synonyms
this
essay, I will discuss Linking Words
this
matter Linking Words
then
followed by reasons to conclude, and Linking Words
also
suggest other ways which can improve that sense in the community.
as we know, Linking Words
the
governments have a lot of responsibilities Correct article usage
apply
about
their society. from basic needs Change preposition
to
such
as health care system Linking Words
provide
security to social justice and having a good atmosphere and improving public happiness. so they usually consider enough money or budget to provide a desirable condition in Wrong verb form
providing
county
Add an article
the county
Add the comma(s)
, for example,
for example
they build leisure centre Linking Words
such
as Linking Words
stadium
or develop sea beach or improve their equipment Add an article
a stadium
also
they try to create free items which ordinary Linking Words
people
can use of them. as far as I Use synonyms
am know
, it is a good and effective way Change the verb form
know
until
can have a good Change preposition
to
spirit
in the country.
Use synonyms
on the other hand
, the Linking Words
government
could hold on Use synonyms
the
free public festivals that have relevant Correct article usage
apply
with
Change preposition
to
culture
of Add an article
the culture
a culture
Use synonyms
people
. Correct article usage
the people
for instance
, in Linking Words
Iran
yalda night and chaharshanbe soori are Add a comma
,Iran
a
good Correct article usage
apply
example
that the Fix the agreement mistake
examples
government
can help Use synonyms
community
and create Add an article
the community
happy
atmosphere Add an article
a happy
between
Change preposition
among
public
. In fact, since Correct article usage
the public
those occasion
Change the determiner
that occasion
those occasions
are
national Change the verb form
is
ceremony
and are important for most Fix the agreement mistake
ceremonies
of
Change preposition
apply
Use synonyms
people
, Add an article
the people
Such
actions by the Linking Words
government
can affect more than any time.
In conclusion, Use synonyms
people
are important capital for each Use synonyms
government
and their Use synonyms
spirit
, Use synonyms
help
the governments until Correct subject-verb agreement
helps
gain
their goals. so a combination of Change the verb form
gaining
create
Change the verb form
creating
Correct your spelling
public
pubic
leisure centres and giving importance to their beliefs and convictions can help until Correct your spelling
public
see
a good Change the verb form
seeing
spirit
between Use synonyms
people
.Use synonyms
Submitted by salehi19862 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
Examples:
I really want to study but I’m too tired.
I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.