A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked you for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • Explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday • Describe some possible disadvantages • Say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

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Dear Lisa, How wonderful it is to hear that you have graduated from your long-term bachelor’s course and now thinking of treating yourself by having a camping holiday for the

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summer. I know you have been waiting for it and I’m glad that you come to me for some pieces of advice before the camp. Camping is the best way to relax away from the bustling and hustling life. My suggestion of the most idealist area is Mount Katumba. It is the summertime so if you go there, you can enjoy a magnificent starburst galaxy at the top every night. You will see the clearly visible Orion’s Belt and various prominent constellations, which you will not want to miss taking the photos to save their beauty.

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, there is going to be a convocation of eagles soaring during the days, and they are extremely friendly. You will not need to be afraid because they do not attack people at all. What I’m worried about is the notorious mosquitoes and insects in the area. Please make sure you bring a killing spray

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you will get some dirty and itchy bite marks which can make you pissed. It is always colder at night, so a heat pack and a fur jacket will keep you chill and warm. And ensure that your tent is in a good condition to withstand heavy breezes during the night. My sister will be back after spending three years studying overseas and we already have a plan to fly to Melbourne to visit our parents

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summer. But don’t forget to share with me some camping fun when we see each other

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time. Take care and stay fine. Warm wishes, Rosy

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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

288 words

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adventure
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outdoors
refreshing
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wildlife
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physical demands
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