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People now have the freedom to work and live anywhere in the world. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

#people #freedom #work #world #trend
In today`s world, all
people
 have
a
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borderless freedom in order to work and live in every place on
the
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Earth. Humanity got
this
 opportunity not so long. Even
one
 hundred years ago humankind could only desire to get to Tokyo from Moscow only in 12 hours, you would need several months for doing
this
 in the past. A Person is not limited by
one
 country now, you can be a citizen of the USA
,
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 but work in Russia
for instance
. Let’s consider some pros and cons of it.
To begin
 with
advantages
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 of
this
.
Firstly
, I would point out that the trend gives
giant
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 possibility to the part of
people
, which don`t have a chance to change their
life
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 in their own country, I say about poor individuals from India
for example
. We know many governments with a dangerous atmosphere, particularly in African countries. Today
people
 can move to Europe for
status
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 of a refugee, to get a job and live in good conditions without threats to health.
Secondly
, it gives a perfect capability to see all our planet and you have a chance to know another culture living among local
people
for example
 in
one
 year. The other side of the coin is,
however
, that
people
 know about
such
 opportunities and
instead
 of developing the homeland and making it prosperous, they prefer to move and begin life from scratch. To draw the conclusion,
one
 can say that it is true happiness
being
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 born in the modern world with all its powers, where you can choose every profession and every country for living
.
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 In my opinion, the freedom of the current time is awesome.
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